The ballad of Sturbwin, the Spooky


The monster with teeth that chew walls in the night


The thing that wants something, but doesn’t want light


It crawls in the halls when it can’t find a bite


Spooky (New Order song)

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The noise that it makes isn’t subtle or slight


I hope the exterminator comes soon.


4 thoughts on “The ballad of Sturbwin, the Spooky

  1. I’m guessing you mean that it should be ‘chews’ rather then ‘chew’. I meant to do that because it teeth that are chewing, but I guess that isn’t clear. Maybe I’ll change it.

  2. Ah! That is a true error and I am deeply troubled by it. I wish you had identified it earlier.

    Also, that is my worst poem so far. I will try not to surpass it until I am too elderly not to.

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